Part 8. Subtle Editing Tips
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This week’s story is Sentence Please
This week we look at
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Sentence Please is a story I edited in just a few hours. Â It was shot simply but very effectively.
Under the opening shot you hear the announcer begin telling a speller that’s getting a word.
Go back and look at how the shots blend together with staggered audio and video cuts.
I want to take the shot of the speller in pink [:01] right as she turns her head. Â The turn of her head helps acknowledge the announcer to her left (our right).
All 3 shot blend together thanks to the audio. Â I sneak the announcer’s audio under the first shot. Â I cut to the shot of the speller in pink before the announcer is done speaking.
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The 3 edits are smooth and help blend the shots together
This is a trick I use all the time
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Stagger audio and video edits
The first reporter track in this story is
52 kids sat on stage
For 52 kids I show a lot of kids on stage. Â The next shot is that of a speller’s hands
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I take the edit the second I see him fumbling with his hands nervously. Â The simple tight shot shows he nervous.
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Very often the action within a shot can help convey a subtle message
I want to keep reinforcing the kids fidgety state throughout the story. Â
After a shot of another speller at the mic, the reporter track is
All with one goal in mind.
The next shot is that of a speller looking down. Â I take the edit right when she moves her hand around. Â Her motion helps convey every one’s feeling while they are on stage. Â
The next shot is of a kid with his hand on his chin
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I take the shot and then he swallows. Â It’s subtle.
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I continue to use shots that I think help convey the feeling of the kids on stage
At [:17] I’m milking a shot. Â I like to maximize shots visually and auditorily. Â I use the shot and the speller says meticulous twice. Â I place the reporter track within the two times the speller say meticulous. Â It’s a subtle way of getting more natural sound into a story.
At [:20] the reporter track is
The 7 to 14 years olds each won their Boulder Valley or St. Vrain school’s contest to get here.
I still want to show that fidgety feeling onstage. Â
This shot of a 7 year old perturbed was too good to pass up. Â His expression tells so much.
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Don’t you just love this shot?
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This shot is subtle. Â I wait to take the shot the second she scratches her face.
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With this shot I wait for her to move her head and then put her hand on her face.
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All these shot are helping visually convey the kid’s feelings while they are on stage
Watch the story again. Â This time pay attention to what each kid is doing in each shot. Â Also pay attention to how the action in the shot helps convey their feelings. Â
Little things like what’s going on in your shot and when you take the edit can often make a good story just a little better.
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Every shot in the this story has meaning
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Subtle moments help make a story better
shawnmontano @ December 5, 2008





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